This gorgeous piece has been included in Typographysical Appearance 3 as a part of ~DustinGen's typography collection. If you have time, please do take a look as it features a lot of resources. I hope it would be useful to you, too, and I'd appreciate it if you leave a comment. Thank you for sharing your brilliant work with us!
nice arrangements of forms, could be more contrast in scales. as there is only large and small. very small would balance it out. They say rules of threes are quite good. I like the messy feel to it, as well as the colour and visual composition. nice work.